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11/23/2003 c1 DeIeted
Gothic perfection. I love it. Short sweet, dark, and deep. Your sentences have such a structure that amplifies your description and feeling. ::She applauded heavily.::

-Sarah-
10/21/2003 c1 53Impressionist
ravishingly horrific, abstract, and therefore perfect. I would say it all happened a bit to quickly for my taste, but I suppose that's all part of the shock factor. meh...whatever the case, I like it!
7/22/2003 c1 Glastonbury
Amazing imagery. I loved it so much, this is the only piece of short fiction that can actually keep me reading it.

Well done, im so impressed, you must be of extreme intelligence and talent to write such a piece.
7/22/2003 c1 40Special K Birmingham
That's very interesting. I like the part about cutting out his eyes so that he can't see himself. So that he belongs to only his master; not even to himself.
7/7/2003 c1 23Psycho Idiot
Um... woah.
7/6/2003 c1 1KittiBear
Short but very interesting. Would have been nice if you had made it longer. Added more detail and such. But it's fine the way you have it. Keep up the good work.

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