for Snowflakes8/15/2003 c1 thisisover
ahh haha, so cute, so clever, so genius!
you know, you're addictive, and i've become an addict. thanks
ahh haha, so cute, so clever, so genius!
you know, you're addictive, and i've become an addict. thanks
7/25/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Of all your recent poetry, I knew I was going to like this one the best...and I was right. This haiku just leaped right into my heart and moved me mercilessly. I absolutely loved it.
Of all your recent poetry, I knew I was going to like this one the best...and I was right. This haiku just leaped right into my heart and moved me mercilessly. I absolutely loved it.
7/15/2003 c1 
106cosmo-queen
This was beautifully written- into mortal hearts, I loved that. Unfortunately where I live, there is no snow so I can only imagine this occurring. *shakes head sadly* Keep up the great work :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenThis was beautifully written- into mortal hearts, I loved that. Unfortunately where I live, there is no snow so I can only imagine this occurring. *shakes head sadly* Keep up the great work :)
*cosmo-queen*
7/12/2003 c1 6Toad-Frog
Wow..its as though ya can see them floating. Excellent job! Thanks for the reviews.
6Toad-FrogWow..its as though ya can see them floating. Excellent job! Thanks for the reviews.
7/9/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
awesome piece! beautifully described, with vivid imagery, nice metaphor also, and good use of alliteration. great job! keep on writing!
36obsidian katanaawesome piece! beautifully described, with vivid imagery, nice metaphor also, and good use of alliteration. great job! keep on writing!
7/9/2003 c1 PainKiller
It's got somewhat of a "dreamy" aspect to it, if you know what I mean. It's almost mystical, as the entire image of snow is. You did a marvelous job on this.
It's got somewhat of a "dreamy" aspect to it, if you know what I mean. It's almost mystical, as the entire image of snow is. You did a marvelous job on this.
7/9/2003 c1 7braggart
I love this. Such great imagery and expression in three simple lines.
Great work.
7braggartI love this. Such great imagery and expression in three simple lines.
Great work.
7/8/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
Oh wie schön! Auch wenn's grad nicht zur Jahreszeit passt... "into mortal hearts", schön!
cio, hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomOh wie schön! Auch wenn's grad nicht zur Jahreszeit passt... "into mortal hearts", schön!
cio, hoellenwauwau