for Beauty12/19/2003 c1 
98Force1295
Depressing way to believe but holy cow look at the words. I'm again speechless
98Force1295Depressing way to believe but holy cow look at the words. I'm again speechless
12/16/2003 c1 141Suicidal Butterfly
Omg, this poem is So beautiful, I love it. THe words are beautiful, I love the end, and the beggining, the layout is perfect. Divine, I could never have created anything as perfect as this.
141Suicidal ButterflyOmg, this poem is So beautiful, I love it. THe words are beautiful, I love the end, and the beggining, the layout is perfect. Divine, I could never have created anything as perfect as this.
7/7/2003 c1 126swift sky silver
that's an ironic ending after all the other descriptions given above. this was well written. keep writing=0)
126swift sky silverthat's an ironic ending after all the other descriptions given above. this was well written. keep writing=0)
7/7/2003 c1 nolongerinuse
I like how you capture the ugliness and the beauty. I also like how your rhyming feels natural; it just clicks that way, it doesn't feel like you just wanted it to rhyme. Good rhythm, good work.
I like how you capture the ugliness and the beauty. I also like how your rhyming feels natural; it just clicks that way, it doesn't feel like you just wanted it to rhyme. Good rhythm, good work.