for Lover's Night Activities4/24/2006 c1 Dark Gethsemane
It was REALLY hot, but hard to read. It's just the whole all-in-one-paragraph thing.
It was REALLY hot, but hard to read. It's just the whole all-in-one-paragraph thing.
6/2/2005 c1 babee - - balla
that was um... very (very very very very very very very very very) graphic
that was um... very (very very very very very very very very very) graphic
11/10/2004 c1 haha
WHEW! (catches breath) i did enjoythis
WHEW! (catches breath) i did enjoythis
7/14/2004 c1 yep
*wipes off the newly dirty computer screen...* ...THAT WAS SO0o0o0o HOT DUDE!
*wipes off the newly dirty computer screen...* ...THAT WAS SO0o0o0o HOT DUDE!
6/10/2004 c1 lummmmy
Yummy. :-D
Yummy. :-D
5/13/2004 c1 princess
wow, that was ... sexy! only one suggestion: PARAGRAPHS! if it was easier to read ... you would drive me mad.
wow, that was ... sexy! only one suggestion: PARAGRAPHS! if it was easier to read ... you would drive me mad.
2/28/2004 c1 
1Jaquard
Beautiful. Really.
Only one slight problem: PARAGRAPHS!
Please, please re-upload this story for all to enjoy, but please put it in paragraphs. It hurts us eyes *smeagol impression*
1JaquardBeautiful. Really.
Only one slight problem: PARAGRAPHS!
Please, please re-upload this story for all to enjoy, but please put it in paragraphs. It hurts us eyes *smeagol impression*
12/29/2003 c1 39Dahlia Wolffe
*gasps* WHOA NELLY! wow. that was definitly in the erotica catagory. PORN PORN PORN! i've written the like of it, but i tossed it and i would never dream of posting it online. wow. must submit to some online porn erotica site. that was shocking. you should change your warning for this story, like that the level is RED or something. well, i was gonna plug a story but the mood was kinda killed. i guess thats why you said "look at the title"
_angel
39Dahlia Wolffe*gasps* WHOA NELLY! wow. that was definitly in the erotica catagory. PORN PORN PORN! i've written the like of it, but i tossed it and i would never dream of posting it online. wow. must submit to some online porn erotica site. that was shocking. you should change your warning for this story, like that the level is RED or something. well, i was gonna plug a story but the mood was kinda killed. i guess thats why you said "look at the title"
_angel
8/30/2003 c1 AlfieG
WOW!
bloody brilliant again!
words can't begin to describe how good i thought this story and all the others are.
my complements to the author for an outstanding job!
Alfie G
WOW!
bloody brilliant again!
words can't begin to describe how good i thought this story and all the others are.
my complements to the author for an outstanding job!
Alfie G
7/9/2003 c1 someonee
love it everythin is describitive and all but hard to read cause its on butched up in one paragraph but its fablous
love it everythin is describitive and all but hard to read cause its on butched up in one paragraph but its fablous
7/8/2003 c1 Dante51
Decent, but for the sake of people reading it, separate it into paragraphs. Thank you.
Decent, but for the sake of people reading it, separate it into paragraphs. Thank you.
7/8/2003 c1 43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife
Wow!That had everything!I was so intrigued by your descriptions.Great Job!
43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLifeWow!That had everything!I was so intrigued by your descriptions.Great Job!