for The Stepbrother12/31/2016 c28 Guest
This is the best story ever I was feeling what the characters
Felt please continue this it was amazing.
This is the best story ever I was feeling what the characters
Felt please continue this it was amazing.
7/3/2015 c28 Love2read
Beautiful story. I keep coming to read it every now and then, and also to see if you've written any more stories, but unfortunately you only have two.
Beautiful story. I keep coming to read it every now and then, and also to see if you've written any more stories, but unfortunately you only have two.
9/4/2013 c28 
1Belly boo1099
Omg awesome story I found it totally and utterly ADORABLE! I loved Zach he was so hot and cute and such a sweetheart! Ahhh I don't want this to be the end...Are you doing a sequel because I want to keep reading about Zach and Jade!
1Belly boo1099Omg awesome story I found it totally and utterly ADORABLE! I loved Zach he was so hot and cute and such a sweetheart! Ahhh I don't want this to be the end...Are you doing a sequel because I want to keep reading about Zach and Jade!
3/27/2013 c23 RubyRed22
Whoa. What is with Olivia in this chap? I don't remember her being this crazy. If I didn't know any better, I would have thought she were the pesky annoying character that's always complaining! XD
Whoa. What is with Olivia in this chap? I don't remember her being this crazy. If I didn't know any better, I would have thought she were the pesky annoying character that's always complaining! XD
3/25/2013 c15 RubyRed22
WHOAWHOAWHOAWHOAWHOA. I was totally pondering the possibility of them getting a divorce, but with the way they acted together, I never thought it would be true! THIS IS SO GREAT!
WHOAWHOAWHOAWHOAWHOA. I was totally pondering the possibility of them getting a divorce, but with the way they acted together, I never thought it would be true! THIS IS SO GREAT!
2/16/2013 c5 SundayMorning73
Ok I got to ch5 and Jades character is so, sorry, annoying that I don't think I can go on. She gets mad at everything! Even regular talking. I kept getting confused and rereading passages because I thought I missed something as to why she was pitching a fit. And for her to feel weird about the stepbrother thing when she is dating her manager...right cause that's not taboo either. Also I feel like it was missing beginning chapters, maybe it should have started when she was first moving in with him so we see her feelings develop because if she's already been living with him for a month or so I'm sure that thought would have crossed her mind way before, especially with all the motorcycle rides. So maybe just a few tweaks, like more insight and jade not acting like a 14 yr old brat.
Ok I got to ch5 and Jades character is so, sorry, annoying that I don't think I can go on. She gets mad at everything! Even regular talking. I kept getting confused and rereading passages because I thought I missed something as to why she was pitching a fit. And for her to feel weird about the stepbrother thing when she is dating her manager...right cause that's not taboo either. Also I feel like it was missing beginning chapters, maybe it should have started when she was first moving in with him so we see her feelings develop because if she's already been living with him for a month or so I'm sure that thought would have crossed her mind way before, especially with all the motorcycle rides. So maybe just a few tweaks, like more insight and jade not acting like a 14 yr old brat.
11/4/2012 c28 missyb1988
I enjoyed this story and a couple of your others, I really like your writing. I loved the characters and the story line, but feel the story was a little rushed. I also felt something was missing but can't figure out what and was a little disappointed with the end. It was romantic, but an epilogue to the future would of been nice. Great work though :)
I enjoyed this story and a couple of your others, I really like your writing. I loved the characters and the story line, but feel the story was a little rushed. I also felt something was missing but can't figure out what and was a little disappointed with the end. It was romantic, but an epilogue to the future would of been nice. Great work though :)