for The Stepbrother
18/1/2008 c14 dreamwriter33
OMG! That was too good! I just can't believe they've been caught by grams and pops!...speechless.
OMG! That was too good! I just can't believe they've been caught by grams and pops!...speechless.
7/1/2008 c9 Roman C Lee
WOOT! Freaking AWESOME! lol, aw, why'd she have to run away? Zach is so sexy it's like . . . omg, *swoons* The way he talks about things, like why he finds virgins attractive, it's beutiful. And really hott, lol. It's midnight and I should go to bed but OMG how can I go to bed after reading that? I have to keep going!
WOOT! Freaking AWESOME! lol, aw, why'd she have to run away? Zach is so sexy it's like . . . omg, *swoons* The way he talks about things, like why he finds virgins attractive, it's beutiful. And really hott, lol. It's midnight and I should go to bed but OMG how can I go to bed after reading that? I have to keep going!
6/30/2008 c4 Roman C Lee
OMG, she has mood swings. Like, one second she's all happy and nice and then she's YELLING, lol. That's crazy but really funny sometimes. I just feel sorry for those confused guys trying to keep up with her.
OMG, she has mood swings. Like, one second she's all happy and nice and then she's YELLING, lol. That's crazy but really funny sometimes. I just feel sorry for those confused guys trying to keep up with her.
6/30/2008 c3 Roman C Lee
Haha, this is so fun! And YAY Zach has started to notice her! And so has this new guy, lol.
Haha, this is so fun! And YAY Zach has started to notice her! And so has this new guy, lol.
6/30/2008 c2 Roman C Lee
Hahaha! *turns to Jade* You SO are falling for your step brother! Just admit it! It's hot! 8turns back to author* WOOT! This is freaking awesome! M, I think I used those same phrazes in my other review, lol, but 'awesome' and 'WOOT' are just things that pop up in my typing everywhere.
lol, one look at his chiseled chest and she's head over heels *smirk* She was already kinda digging him before that, I bet.
Hahaha! *turns to Jade* You SO are falling for your step brother! Just admit it! It's hot! 8turns back to author* WOOT! This is freaking awesome! M, I think I used those same phrazes in my other review, lol, but 'awesome' and 'WOOT' are just things that pop up in my typing everywhere.
lol, one look at his chiseled chest and she's head over heels *smirk* She was already kinda digging him before that, I bet.
6/30/2008 c1 Roman C Lee
O! This is awesome! Would you mind if I added this story to my C2? It's for family love that goes beyond normal 'family love'. I wanted to ask because I wasn't sure if authors would be, like, mad that their stories were being put into an incest C2. I wasn't sure if that would offend anyone. So is it alright?
Great job with this first chapter! Dude, she really can take care of herself, and OMG he's hot, lol. I can't wait to keep reading! WOOT!
O! This is awesome! Would you mind if I added this story to my C2? It's for family love that goes beyond normal 'family love'. I wanted to ask because I wasn't sure if authors would be, like, mad that their stories were being put into an incest C2. I wasn't sure if that would offend anyone. So is it alright?
Great job with this first chapter! Dude, she really can take care of herself, and OMG he's hot, lol. I can't wait to keep reading! WOOT!
5/17/2008 c21 Hannah
EW! GO AWAY JOSH! Nobody likes you so GO AWAY!
EW! GO AWAY JOSH! Nobody likes you so GO AWAY!
8/24/2007 c28 chickflickjunkie
oh my god! i loved this! it was just soo romantic and sweet at the end...yea i know i sound like a flake, but oh well..=D
oh my god! i loved this! it was just soo romantic and sweet at the end...yea i know i sound like a flake, but oh well..=D
8/6/2007 c28 Strangely Natural
Precious and cute with few but real tribulations, is there going to be a sequel?
Precious and cute with few but real tribulations, is there going to be a sequel?