for Because of Michelle7/14/2003 c2 
12Chell-o Bodello
I don't think it was "SUCKY". I think it was a little "RUSTY" but I liked it, none the less. It's so nice to finally read about a girl with my name and not have her a stuck-up snobby girl. Never stop writing! It would be a crime! ^^
12Chell-o BodelloI don't think it was "SUCKY". I think it was a little "RUSTY" but I liked it, none the less. It's so nice to finally read about a girl with my name and not have her a stuck-up snobby girl. Never stop writing! It would be a crime! ^^
7/12/2003 c2 Vincenza
Must write more. must write more. must write more.
Must write more. must write more. must write more.
7/12/2003 c2 firess
well, it wasnt that sucky...i admit there have been better, but there have also been worse,ukno? nz, good job on progressing the story line.
well, it wasnt that sucky...i admit there have been better, but there have also been worse,ukno? nz, good job on progressing the story line.
7/12/2003 c2 6Lisa0211
Not smart...I could never date anyone who wasn't smart...it's the snob in me. But she seems really nice. That was nice to listen to a stranger's life story. It was a good start. And I believe in online dates coming to life because my friend met her current BF online. I don't advocate it. But ya. Ok,great job. ~Lisa~
6Lisa0211Not smart...I could never date anyone who wasn't smart...it's the snob in me. But she seems really nice. That was nice to listen to a stranger's life story. It was a good start. And I believe in online dates coming to life because my friend met her current BF online. I don't advocate it. But ya. Ok,great job. ~Lisa~
7/9/2003 c1 36JackMcMichaelAKA hopeless
THis is SO good. Write more. Although... shouldn't his father be in prison...?
36JackMcMichaelAKA hopelessTHis is SO good. Write more. Although... shouldn't his father be in prison...?
7/9/2003 c1 blahdebloop
hey! this is a very good beginning! i like the way the story is going even though everything that happened to him is very sad...keep on writing and update soon! =)
hey! this is a very good beginning! i like the way the story is going even though everything that happened to him is very sad...keep on writing and update soon! =)
7/9/2003 c1 73Eternal Twilight
Wow! That's getting very good! So much emotion wrapped up in one chapter! You've got some serious talent! O.O I can't wait for the next chapter and aw, poor Chloe. ;_; I hope things get better for her, and I hope that Craig suffers for what he did. Please update soon! ^^
~ZB
73Eternal TwilightWow! That's getting very good! So much emotion wrapped up in one chapter! You've got some serious talent! O.O I can't wait for the next chapter and aw, poor Chloe. ;_; I hope things get better for her, and I hope that Craig suffers for what he did. Please update soon! ^^
~ZB
7/9/2003 c1 JazzeeT
interesting... i really really like. update soon.
r&r my story if u have time please
interesting... i really really like. update soon.
r&r my story if u have time please
7/9/2003 c1 Frost
I don't have time now to read this but it sounds really good.
Signing off from the Outworld its,
*Frost*
P.S.
Did ya get the name Kitana from Mortal Kombat?
*Frost*
I don't have time now to read this but it sounds really good.
Signing off from the Outworld its,
*Frost*
P.S.
Did ya get the name Kitana from Mortal Kombat?
*Frost*
7/9/2003 c1 6Lisa0211
Well, he certainly has a warped sense of logic, no matter how tragic his past is. This story has potential to be very good. You will have to take his transformation slowly, very slowly, but it should be awsome! I'm excited to see how you work this. Keep up the good work! Update soon. ~Lisa~
6Lisa0211Well, he certainly has a warped sense of logic, no matter how tragic his past is. This story has potential to be very good. You will have to take his transformation slowly, very slowly, but it should be awsome! I'm excited to see how you work this. Keep up the good work! Update soon. ~Lisa~
7/9/2003 c1 12Chell-o Bodello
Hey! :: blinks :: I was attracted to the title because my real name's Michelle and I like it so far! ^.~ Keep it up!
If it isn't too much to ask, could you review my stories/poems sometime? ^^
12Chell-o BodelloHey! :: blinks :: I was attracted to the title because my real name's Michelle and I like it so far! ^.~ Keep it up!
If it isn't too much to ask, could you review my stories/poems sometime? ^^