for Let me see You as I Used to6/16/2004 c1 
7becks13
I really like this poem. I've had some times when I just need to recognize that God's in control, your poem is great. I love your writing.
7becks13I really like this poem. I've had some times when I just need to recognize that God's in control, your poem is great. I love your writing.
12/27/2003 c1 1Renzokugan
This accurately captures the doubt that a lot of people go thru at some point in their lives. It's a very beautifully written poem.
1RenzokuganThis accurately captures the doubt that a lot of people go thru at some point in their lives. It's a very beautifully written poem.
8/27/2003 c1 Mrs. Ekeena Greenleaf
That is an amazing poem. That is really really great.
That is an amazing poem. That is really really great.
8/5/2003 c1 57makkenjii
This is very elegant. It reminds me of a combination of a prayer and maybe a rock song or something. Great work! Also, thanks for your review!
57makkenjiiThis is very elegant. It reminds me of a combination of a prayer and maybe a rock song or something. Great work! Also, thanks for your review!
7/18/2003 c1 bettyjo
i've felt like this before too. i like the repetitions, they work. good job.
i've felt like this before too. i like the repetitions, they work. good job.
7/11/2003 c1 Brenron
Wow, this is good.
Wow, this is good.