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4/11/2000 c1 dafnap
weeeee! i loved it!...ssooooo goood...anyhoo, see at demo team
4/11/2000 c1 Tabbycat2000
Let's face it, your punutation sucked, and the name Seastorm is kinda cheesy. But other than that, it was a wonderful story. Just a little tip- next time put the story into individual paragraphs.
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