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7/10/2003 c1 2Esay
Nice one. I like the fusing of the wires, keep this kinda thing up.
7/10/2003 c1 21Miamouse
couple of little niggles... capital letters are only for the beginnings of sentances. "you couldn't bear" it should be- unless you were going for a pun.

Otherwise, this is really good. I love "you fuse together, become one wire"

Mia :)

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