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10/6/2003 c1 8Lost-in-Insanity
Love this one. Has feeling
9/30/2003 c1 26wordpainter241
My God do I love this: in fact, all my personalities love this. Finally, they agreed on something.
8/28/2003 c1 9ironic li
really really really really strong. i love it with a big l-o-v-e. i think something that would make this even stronger would be to add similies, even though i think that might ruin some of the style. and the last lines... so powerful... i might, if i were you, and this is totally up to you, say i am still here, to add the effect, but in all honesty, you don't need it, seeing as thats what the rest of the poem is about. by the way, being a shameless self advertiser, i have two more (short) chapters up :-D

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7/24/2003 c1 19jab
loved it! :)
7/21/2003 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
well said, definatly well said...
7/18/2003 c1 100broken wings241
Yeah, so am I. I guess together we make something whole, a completed picture or a melody that perfectly cadences, right?

You know you're brilliant and amazing and I love you, I don't have to tell you that.

Btw, as usual, I can relate to what you write.
7/18/2003 c1 18Iammealso-JC
ok.
7/10/2003 c1 7wavy avey
it is a really beautiful poem, it is very deep, really loved it, keep em coming!
7/10/2003 c1 28Softly Jae
I am always one for brief, powerful poetry. I really like this poem. The feelings are right there as though plastered on the page. This is good.

-keep writing-
7/10/2003 c1 176DefianceIsMe
This is a great poem...this is a poem that should be read aloud...it has so much passion in it...so much feeling. A truly great job. ^_^

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