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10/2/2006 c1 24MizukiAi
^ ^ good poem... Although I think it ends okay just like this... sort of an open ending so others can interpret it differently depending on preference or even personal experience...love to see more

~Mizuki Ai
7/4/2004 c1 24LovesTeardrop
Aww I liked that. Full of such emotion. And I think it ends fine. Very good
7/11/2003 c1 35Dark Enchanted
Aw, so sad. This is another one that is like about everyone. Very good. Keep it up!
7/11/2003 c1 27Exceedingly Eccentric
Looks pretty finished to me! ^^

Good job on this, keep up the good work.
7/11/2003 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
Wow, I just happened to click on the "Just In" link, and, lo and behold, I see something by you! What a flipping coincidence! o_o

Anyway, I really liked this when it was a song, and I like it now as a poem. But...did you mean for the last two lines to be spaced out like that? Or is that just one of those lovely formatting fuck-overs that FP.com loves to do?

Ja. Good poem. ^^ More!

~ME! Amazing, masterz of teh universe!

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