for Paper Dragon2/27/2018 c1 Guest
Oh God, lol, I was expecting a happy ending but there we go I guess
Oh God, lol, I was expecting a happy ending but there we go I guess
10/26/2006 c1 
18Chiclets
Oh, that's so sad...is Cody mentally...troubled? Why did he kill Annie just like that? One would think that for someone he trusted, he would trust her a bit more. And he was obviously sad, but he wouldn't hesitate to kill her?
Thinking people wouldn't review cuz this was a one-shot is sorta...I don't know. Because I love one-shots just as much as I love actual long stories, providing they are well written, of course.
18ChicletsOh, that's so sad...is Cody mentally...troubled? Why did he kill Annie just like that? One would think that for someone he trusted, he would trust her a bit more. And he was obviously sad, but he wouldn't hesitate to kill her?
Thinking people wouldn't review cuz this was a one-shot is sorta...I don't know. Because I love one-shots just as much as I love actual long stories, providing they are well written, of course.
9/24/2005 c1 Cloudie
Wow .. this story is really powerful. It's amazing and tragic, and I love it so much ^_^ Poor cody : ( It was really tragic for a 6 yr old boy. Darn those people who did this to him T_T
Wow .. this story is really powerful. It's amazing and tragic, and I love it so much ^_^ Poor cody : ( It was really tragic for a 6 yr old boy. Darn those people who did this to him T_T
8/1/2005 c1 NinjutsuMaster
This was so well written. I felt I was actually seeing this as though I was there, or at least watching, like, a movie or something. I started saying things out loud and changing my voice(though not very well...)to match the different characters. I thought it was so sad when all the people died in front of Cody, and I feel really sorry for him. He's six years old and he has to go through all that. But this was really good.
This was so well written. I felt I was actually seeing this as though I was there, or at least watching, like, a movie or something. I started saying things out loud and changing my voice(though not very well...)to match the different characters. I thought it was so sad when all the people died in front of Cody, and I feel really sorry for him. He's six years old and he has to go through all that. But this was really good.
5/20/2005 c1 35destroyed perfection
i love this story i printed it out and showed it to my friends and they really liked also now they want to read stories online too.
35destroyed perfectioni love this story i printed it out and showed it to my friends and they really liked also now they want to read stories online too.
4/20/2005 c1 bibble
oh my. wow. that was so... wow. that's all i can say. i'm speechless. a six year old boy? i mean... very... interesting... but very well written. such a unique plot as well. i congratulate you on a job well done. poor kid though. just imagine what cody feels...
oh my. wow. that was so... wow. that's all i can say. i'm speechless. a six year old boy? i mean... very... interesting... but very well written. such a unique plot as well. i congratulate you on a job well done. poor kid though. just imagine what cody feels...
1/24/2005 c1 Helen
I actually really like this story, even if it is a one-shot
It's very beatifully written
But it would be nice if maybe you could do a sequal to do because I think that it's a really original idea
Come to think of it, I never read a story with a plotline like this before
Be it if you will, this story has paved a great path for you for something bigger
It's a real shame than a story like this has so little reviews
I actually really like this story, even if it is a one-shot
It's very beatifully written
But it would be nice if maybe you could do a sequal to do because I think that it's a really original idea
Come to think of it, I never read a story with a plotline like this before
Be it if you will, this story has paved a great path for you for something bigger
It's a real shame than a story like this has so little reviews
9/2/2004 c1 KiTTi KaT
oh my. this story was so good! you are very creative ^^. i love your stories. =]
oh my. this story was so good! you are very creative ^^. i love your stories. =]
6/26/2004 c1 6Lightning Rain
Oh my. This is beautiful and yet twisted. I can't even begin to describe how good this is. The symbolism, plot, characters, details, they all weave together into a beautiful tapestry of this story. It's amazing. Fantastic job!
6Lightning RainOh my. This is beautiful and yet twisted. I can't even begin to describe how good this is. The symbolism, plot, characters, details, they all weave together into a beautiful tapestry of this story. It's amazing. Fantastic job!
3/18/2004 c1 Helen
I think that this is a really great story, even for a one-shot!
I've also read your other story, which i really love, but please, UPDATE!
I think that this is a really great story, even for a one-shot!
I've also read your other story, which i really love, but please, UPDATE!
3/14/2004 c1 Agathy
Admittedly, I got tired of waiting for you to update The Spider's Web, so I check out this story...and I'm really glad I did, because it was beautifully written. I was draw in by the first sentence, too, by the way. I've always found telepathy to be an interesting subject, though not nearly as interesting as some others...but that's beside the point. This story just reminds me why I would never, ever want to be telepathic...poor kid- I actually feel sorry for him. I mean, having to deal with that so-called "gift" and being forced to "read" people...heck, I can understand why he'd want to kill them. Lol, that probably wasn't the point of the story...I have a feeling I missed something. Okay, no I didn't, it's just 1:31 AM and that explains this...odd...review. So I'll sign off with...you're a great writer! And I love the way your ideas flow, too.
Admittedly, I got tired of waiting for you to update The Spider's Web, so I check out this story...and I'm really glad I did, because it was beautifully written. I was draw in by the first sentence, too, by the way. I've always found telepathy to be an interesting subject, though not nearly as interesting as some others...but that's beside the point. This story just reminds me why I would never, ever want to be telepathic...poor kid- I actually feel sorry for him. I mean, having to deal with that so-called "gift" and being forced to "read" people...heck, I can understand why he'd want to kill them. Lol, that probably wasn't the point of the story...I have a feeling I missed something. Okay, no I didn't, it's just 1:31 AM and that explains this...odd...review. So I'll sign off with...you're a great writer! And I love the way your ideas flow, too.
3/7/2004 c1 hummer
*swallows* Um.. well.. that was... scary... *starts bawling* I'm gonna have nightmares all week... I'm gonna hate little boys from now on... ahha. jk.. Seriously though.. that was scary.. and a bit creepy. I can't help but shudder... My stomach is now all weird because it was so scary... jeez... But though it was really scary, i loved it lots. Hey.. i seem to be using the word, scary, a lot, huh? heh.. oops.. please excuse my limited vocabulary. hahah..
*swallows* Um.. well.. that was... scary... *starts bawling* I'm gonna have nightmares all week... I'm gonna hate little boys from now on... ahha. jk.. Seriously though.. that was scary.. and a bit creepy. I can't help but shudder... My stomach is now all weird because it was so scary... jeez... But though it was really scary, i loved it lots. Hey.. i seem to be using the word, scary, a lot, huh? heh.. oops.. please excuse my limited vocabulary. hahah..
2/26/2004 c1 siren
Man, I was totally expecting him to send her to the corn field! This is just like something out of the Twilight Zone "Ne de de de Ne de de de"
But totally awsome! I really qsn't expecting the kid to do that to her, and then when he killed 300 people in the base...I got chills. So let me tell you again, fantastic job!
Man, I was totally expecting him to send her to the corn field! This is just like something out of the Twilight Zone "Ne de de de Ne de de de"
But totally awsome! I really qsn't expecting the kid to do that to her, and then when he killed 300 people in the base...I got chills. So let me tell you again, fantastic job!