for Ever After4/1/2004 c1 
76CoolBeans18s
Wow! What an amazing piece! I absolutely love this, its such an original concept!
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sWow! What an amazing piece! I absolutely love this, its such an original concept!
~ CoolBeans18s
12/29/2003 c1 lil blue song bird it's too early to sign in
Awesome job...You might say some it's worth it in the end but some don't last till that kind of end. A talentedly written piece
Awesome job...You might say some it's worth it in the end but some don't last till that kind of end. A talentedly written piece
7/13/2003 c1 7whiteai
very good I liked it a lot!
plz check out my poem called "What If Jesus Was"
very good
7whiteaivery good I liked it a lot!
plz check out my poem called "What If Jesus Was"
very good
7/12/2003 c1 3careless whisper
Slightly cliche from the get go. The curtain/play idea already taken. Ever seen As You Like It. I don't want to pick this to pieces. All I'll say is that it needs some brushing up.
3careless whisperSlightly cliche from the get go. The curtain/play idea already taken. Ever seen As You Like It. I don't want to pick this to pieces. All I'll say is that it needs some brushing up.
7/12/2003 c1 34Wasted Postage
Oh! I loved this one! You did an excellent job! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
~*~AbunaiChikara
34Wasted PostageOh! I loved this one! You did an excellent job! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
~*~AbunaiChikara
7/11/2003 c1 PainKiller
Oh... WOW. This is unbelievably awesome... I can't put into words how incredible that this is. This is going on my favorites. Honestly. Simply amazing. You've stunned me.
Oh... WOW. This is unbelievably awesome... I can't put into words how incredible that this is. This is going on my favorites. Honestly. Simply amazing. You've stunned me.