for Red Clouds9/28/2003 c1 Deana Bell
Beautifully worded. You create vivid pictures with just black and white.
~God bless~
Beautifully worded. You create vivid pictures with just black and white.
~God bless~
7/15/2003 c1 
1hmsgirl
Wow. I don't know what to say. It makes me think when I read it, which is a good thing.
1hmsgirlWow. I don't know what to say. It makes me think when I read it, which is a good thing.
7/12/2003 c1 PainKiller
This may be one the very best poems that I've read in my time here on FictionPress. Your wording was simply incredible. When you choose your words, you are so meticulous in the language and the meaning... it's incredible.
And the message you gave was just awesome. This only makes my decision to put this story on my favorites even more strong. This story is a keeper (in case you didn't already know). Keep on writing, you've got an amazing talent.
This may be one the very best poems that I've read in my time here on FictionPress. Your wording was simply incredible. When you choose your words, you are so meticulous in the language and the meaning... it's incredible.
And the message you gave was just awesome. This only makes my decision to put this story on my favorites even more strong. This story is a keeper (in case you didn't already know). Keep on writing, you've got an amazing talent.
7/12/2003 c1 34Wasted Postage
Wow! This is definately going on my favorites list! Excellent work!
~*~AbunaiChikara
34Wasted PostageWow! This is definately going on my favorites list! Excellent work!
~*~AbunaiChikara