8/4/2003 c10 eleven
i really like this chapter...shiken is funny when he's drunk...hehehehehe ^_^ update soon plz...later days
i really like this chapter...shiken is funny when he's drunk...hehehehehe ^_^ update soon plz...later days
7/29/2003 c9 eleven
aww...how sweet...shiken didn't kill kyo because he loves him...yes you did a wonderful job with the showing of the love but still with the sense of dutiness ^_^...please update soon!
aww...how sweet...shiken didn't kill kyo because he loves him...yes you did a wonderful job with the showing of the love but still with the sense of dutiness ^_^...please update soon!
7/29/2003 c8 28GoldenTears
No one's reviewing? I haven't noticed, i've been entraped with your story! Lol, I love the book, it's awesome...Kyo, he has got to be the perfect character...I dunno, he just appeals to me, lol, loved this chapter, don't worry if people aren't review, they don't know what they're missing (I do it all the time), keep writing because that's what you love, not because people want you to. Do it for yourself, and if people like it, great! It'll come together, it always does!
UPDATE SOON!
-GoldenTears-
No one's reviewing? I haven't noticed, i've been entraped with your story! Lol, I love the book, it's awesome...Kyo, he has got to be the perfect character...I dunno, he just appeals to me, lol, loved this chapter, don't worry if people aren't review, they don't know what they're missing (I do it all the time), keep writing because that's what you love, not because people want you to. Do it for yourself, and if people like it, great! It'll come together, it always does!
UPDATE SOON!
-GoldenTears-
7/21/2003 c7 GoldenTears
Not bad...Aren is becoming one of my favorite characters, but seems to pop up at unwanted times...lol...Great chapter, I love it! lol
Update soon!
-GoldenTears-
Not bad...Aren is becoming one of my favorite characters, but seems to pop up at unwanted times...lol...Great chapter, I love it! lol
Update soon!
-GoldenTears-
7/21/2003 c6 GoldenTears
lol, Kyo's great. He's the off beat character that wants it all...lol, he can't get much better then that...or can he? I know what would make him better...Shiken...m...yep, I'm off to read the next chapter.
Keep updating-
-GoldenTears-
lol, Kyo's great. He's the off beat character that wants it all...lol, he can't get much better then that...or can he? I know what would make him better...Shiken...m...yep, I'm off to read the next chapter.
Keep updating-
-GoldenTears-
7/18/2003 c5 GoldenTears
what...just...happened? ((Blink))...lol, it was a great chapter, and prolly an important one at that...That's what I'd say. Well, that doesn't matter, UPDATE SOON! I'm looking forward to more!
-GoldenTears-
what...just...happened? ((Blink))...lol, it was a great chapter, and prolly an important one at that...That's what I'd say. Well, that doesn't matter, UPDATE SOON! I'm looking forward to more!
-GoldenTears-
7/16/2003 c4 GoldenTears
It's really got some spice to it. lol...I think it's really set apart from what you've been writing..I say this because, this time, the problem is still love...but the situation is totally different. I mean, his family bloodlines are at risk...what more drama could you ask for? lol. Update soon!I Love your imagination! It rocks!
-GoldenTears-
It's really got some spice to it. lol...I think it's really set apart from what you've been writing..I say this because, this time, the problem is still love...but the situation is totally different. I mean, his family bloodlines are at risk...what more drama could you ask for? lol. Update soon!I Love your imagination! It rocks!
-GoldenTears-