for Bang7/12/2003 c1 
57teh tarik
Great poem. It flows well...was a bit hard to understand in the first few lines, but I managed to grasp the meaning as I read on.
57teh tarikGreat poem. It flows well...was a bit hard to understand in the first few lines, but I managed to grasp the meaning as I read on.
7/11/2003 c1 12Tolles
Wow. This is expressionful. I really like the way you 'just sit down and start writing about nothing in partucular' or what you said. Now, I couldn't really decide whether you were talking about a sword or a switchblade or gun or what. But I really like this poem, violent as it is. Hehe.
Thanx,
Meghan ^_^
12TollesWow. This is expressionful. I really like the way you 'just sit down and start writing about nothing in partucular' or what you said. Now, I couldn't really decide whether you were talking about a sword or a switchblade or gun or what. But I really like this poem, violent as it is. Hehe.
Thanx,
Meghan ^_^