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3/3/2004 c1 460Time To Change
load of depth. reminded me of my life actually, thats kinda sad... not ur poem. newa this is a great poem and ur amazing at making stuff ryhme. i wish i cud werite like this. btw thnx agen for revewing my poem.
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7/22/2003 c1 23CASSIEgrl32
wow im gonna hav to say thats the best poem ive read on fictionpress. omg. also, thank u 4 the review. i read all the ppl that reviewed me's poetry. but wow. i didnt no wut to expect but that was just amazing...
7/22/2003 c1 5Callipher
Simply loved the rhymes!
7/19/2003 c1 30The B.A.T
Dang. You got some pretty powerful lines in there "Mournful regrets of tragic mistakes." This is a sad, very beautiful poem. Reminds me of my life, basically. I wanna cry now. I think I'm going to. Thanks a lot for making me cry jerk! *translating* In other words, good job! ^_^
7/13/2003 c1 38Vorhang
I really liked this one. It actually rhymed! q= Great content, imagery. Not too long, not too short. Kudos
7/12/2003 c1 xDarkend Metalx
below the surface (deep)
7/12/2003 c1 15Fit of Destiny
Simply beautiful. Deep. *Speechless*

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