for Shadowscape10/4/2005 c1 
20circumspice
Shadow writerReads a shadow poemDecides to leaveA shadow reviewThat poem was greatIt had lots of shadowsIt sure leaves my writingIn the dark. :)
20circumspiceShadow writerReads a shadow poemDecides to leaveA shadow reviewThat poem was greatIt had lots of shadowsIt sure leaves my writingIn the dark. :)
1/25/2005 c1 25Devika-Fay
lotz of shadows...i couldn't find a line that didn't have shadow in it. you were right..lol.
25Devika-Faylotz of shadows...i couldn't find a line that didn't have shadow in it. you were right..lol.
12/30/2004 c1 A Fellow Writer
this is beautiful! this is a very touching story. i love it! i'll be looking out for a book by you! hmm..i don't think the author will be "AutumnDark" though...
this is beautiful! this is a very touching story. i love it! i'll be looking out for a book by you! hmm..i don't think the author will be "AutumnDark" though...
3/11/2004 c1 Larpskendya
Wow. I am so repeating that word at this moment in time. I'd really like to know what inspired you to write this. Few things move me to extremities but this one did so well done. Wow.
Wow. I am so repeating that word at this moment in time. I'd really like to know what inspired you to write this. Few things move me to extremities but this one did so well done. Wow.
2/26/2004 c1 2Xaara
I loved the repetition and meter you managed to keep consistent throughout the poem - I can almost imagine a storyteller in front of a fire, starting slowly, then gradually increasing the tempo and volume until the abrupt final line. There aren't any words out of place, and the rhyming and emphasis is entirely natural. Definitely a poem to read aloud.
Wonderful work.
2XaaraI loved the repetition and meter you managed to keep consistent throughout the poem - I can almost imagine a storyteller in front of a fire, starting slowly, then gradually increasing the tempo and volume until the abrupt final line. There aren't any words out of place, and the rhyming and emphasis is entirely natural. Definitely a poem to read aloud.
Wonderful work.
10/2/2003 c1 Andrala
My name is Andrala, and I do believe I shall join this site soon. I am on fanfiction.net...
this was an excellent poem... my love for this cannot be correctly expressed in the time I have alotted...
i'm, in a way, sort of a dark person when it come to poetry and music, i blame the whole "Bubble-gum pop" thing that occured a few years ago, and sadly, i was part of the fandom... then i "grew up" (? hah-hah, i'm only 14...)
anyway, great job, loved it to peices.
~Andrala~
My name is Andrala, and I do believe I shall join this site soon. I am on fanfiction.net...
this was an excellent poem... my love for this cannot be correctly expressed in the time I have alotted...
i'm, in a way, sort of a dark person when it come to poetry and music, i blame the whole "Bubble-gum pop" thing that occured a few years ago, and sadly, i was part of the fandom... then i "grew up" (? hah-hah, i'm only 14...)
anyway, great job, loved it to peices.
~Andrala~
9/20/2003 c1 elise
This is a very good poem/story. Your macabre imagery is lovely. keep up the good work.
This is a very good poem/story. Your macabre imagery is lovely. keep up the good work.
9/15/2003 c1 4Ethelflaed
(blink blink) Coolness.
That isn't a word. It's slang. Bad Flaed, bad!
Okay, let's see.
Shadowness!
-.- NO, Flaed.
Kind-of-strange-but-really-haunting-in-a-confusing-wayness!
I liked it.
4Ethelflaed(blink blink) Coolness.
That isn't a word. It's slang. Bad Flaed, bad!
Okay, let's see.
Shadowness!
-.- NO, Flaed.
Kind-of-strange-but-really-haunting-in-a-confusing-wayness!
I liked it.
8/7/2003 c1 2Paint It Black
This is beautiful. Breathtaking. The way you've created something so wide and powerful around one word is amazing. I adore this poem.
2Paint It BlackThis is beautiful. Breathtaking. The way you've created something so wide and powerful around one word is amazing. I adore this poem.
7/30/2003 c1 MaskedCoconut
She sounds very... alone, a very hardened person, on the outside at least. I thought that the repeating of the word 'shadow' would get annoying, but it didn't. It just fit into every line. The poem has a really strong rhythm. It was great- keep it up.
She sounds very... alone, a very hardened person, on the outside at least. I thought that the repeating of the word 'shadow' would get annoying, but it didn't. It just fit into every line. The poem has a really strong rhythm. It was great- keep it up.
7/25/2003 c1 the all powerful magnificent me
Me being the freak I happily am I checked. No line without shadow in it.
Me being the freak I happily am I checked. No line without shadow in it.
7/24/2003 c1 BklynQueenie
Wow, that was some poem...loved the reacuring 'shadow', it really added to the tune of the poem.
Wow, that was some poem...loved the reacuring 'shadow', it really added to the tune of the poem.