for All of us Within7/24/2003 c3 
31Cindy Moon
^^ I couldn't help but laugh at the beginning. The humor was well needed considering the dramatic turns this story will be taking. (I know your writing, something huge is always planned for later chapters)
Keep writing!
-Cindy Moon *)
31Cindy Moon^^ I couldn't help but laugh at the beginning. The humor was well needed considering the dramatic turns this story will be taking. (I know your writing, something huge is always planned for later chapters)
Keep writing!
-Cindy Moon *)
7/24/2003 c3 idesel
ok, when you are a famous book writer email me so i can buy you books cause you awsome. i love you stories so much. oh and thanks for reviewing form my poem
ok, when you are a famous book writer email me so i can buy you books cause you awsome. i love you stories so much. oh and thanks for reviewing form my poem
7/16/2003 c2 31Cindy Moon
*in awe* This is just incredible! I love the dialogue, it fits the ages of the characters(seriously i've seen children shout F-you in public)
All in all I have no criticism... x.x
darn you're getting to good for my unhelpful comments now.
^^ WONDERFUL WORK!
-Cindy Moon *)
31Cindy Moon*in awe* This is just incredible! I love the dialogue, it fits the ages of the characters(seriously i've seen children shout F-you in public)
All in all I have no criticism... x.x
darn you're getting to good for my unhelpful comments now.
^^ WONDERFUL WORK!
-Cindy Moon *)
7/13/2003 c1 7idesel
wow, that is a very different plot for you. it's so sad. but i trust their will be lots of love, backstabbing, and fights right? i hope. anyways good as always.
7ideselwow, that is a very different plot for you. it's so sad. but i trust their will be lots of love, backstabbing, and fights right? i hope. anyways good as always.
7/12/2003 c1 31Cindy Moon
^^ I'm glad you got this posted so quickly! Despite how much it seems like I hate this; I can tell this will be one of your best works yet! *just jealous* I love the way you portrayed the innocence in the characters but at the same time gave them a sense of maturity. I LOVE THIS! Now then, what becomes of little Adrian? You'd better be writing the second chapter!
-Cindy Moon *)
31Cindy Moon^^ I'm glad you got this posted so quickly! Despite how much it seems like I hate this; I can tell this will be one of your best works yet! *just jealous* I love the way you portrayed the innocence in the characters but at the same time gave them a sense of maturity. I LOVE THIS! Now then, what becomes of little Adrian? You'd better be writing the second chapter!
-Cindy Moon *)