
3/11/2004 c3
178FigureItOut
you REALLY have to finish this! I'm so anxious to find out what happens, great writing

you REALLY have to finish this! I'm so anxious to find out what happens, great writing
11/24/2003 c3
28initiative
you are absolutely brilliant. all your writing is so great you are off to my favourites list.

you are absolutely brilliant. all your writing is so great you are off to my favourites list.
7/16/2003 c2 stonesphynx
Great story so far. Believable characters, and nice dialogue. And nice way of introducing the conflict so early in the story. I hope you update soon.
Great story so far. Believable characters, and nice dialogue. And nice way of introducing the conflict so early in the story. I hope you update soon.