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12/13/2005 c3 1Finnyh
woo, this is a long chapter but the best so far I think! I love stories like this. you know, the ones that are so brilliantly written and I REALLY do appreciate the help you gave me with mine. UPDATE SOON!

Nyviay xx
12/13/2005 c2 Finnyh
Again another brilliant chapter and I love the way everything is written in such fine detail. takes me a while to read , probably because it so fabulous, that I like to read some parts over again! THANKS FOR BEING SO AWESOME! :)

Nyviay x
12/13/2005 c1 Finnyh
Oh! this is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading it! Unlike mine, I can't find anything to improve. I thought I would read some of your stories and leave reviews. To return the favour. Thanks anyway for YOUR reveiews and I have improved my story a great deal. THANKS! anyway, back to yours. I can't wait to finish this review and read the next chapter! WOOT! lol

Nyviay x
11/17/2005 c3 25MacNWoody
story's got me hooked, lol, looking forward to more, t2ul!
8/18/2003 c3 4Plateado
I hadn't been expecting that to happen. Well, I mean I knew that Darren would die, but I hadn't been expecting her to be watching! Good chapter! Update the next one soon!

8/11/2003 c2 Plateado
Hm, something going on at headquarters? That can't be too good.

Good chapter, and I'm glad that it was finally posted. I've been looking out for it! Post the next chapter soon.

7/20/2003 c1 3Anamania
Very curious and intriguing. There was just the right amount of description to support the story line so far, and the charaterisation is great. I'm sure this story will live up to expectations if not surpass them. (hehe, I get to use big words)
7/19/2003 c1 7ku
It's good how you started with action instead of something boring. In your dialogue, you put the comma inside the double inverted commas ("I will protect him," said John not "I will protect him", said John).

Furthermore, your description of guys can be so stereotypical "spikey hair"..."strong chin"..."broad chest"...etc. You did the exact same thing in your previous story. It's equivalent to someone making the good female characters all slim, blonde, etc and making all the evil female characters fat and ugly.

Otherwise, the story's fairly good. If you look at my favorite stories list you'll see that only your story appears, and I've read many stories.
7/15/2003 c1 4Plateado
I didn't realize you had started another story! You need to inform me of thee things or I may never know!

This story has potential, and I like your new approach. This story and In The Tigers Mouth do have some similarities, but at the same time they're opposite. I like the change, and I like this story. I just don't see why the general has to kill Darren. Why not just reassign him to another department that is so totally different from the one he and Electra were in together? Oh well. Killing Darren gives the story edge, if you ask me. I look forward to the next one!


P.S. I don't want to sound really pushy or like a begger or anything, but I was wondering if you would like to check out my original story. It's called Secrets of the Sea. If you don't have the time or anything that's fine, I would just like to get your expert opinion on it. ;) Thanks, and I'll talk to ya later!
7/14/2003 c1 8Raven O'Connor
Hey, this looks like a great start! I can't wait to see how this one goes.

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