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8/23/2007 c1 2JD Allen
That was cool. I admire your bravery in posting something so spiritual. I'm always a little hesitant about expressing my faith (something I have to work on) so I love it when I see people freely showing it.

Very cool.
7/24/2005 c1 19Kat-Renee Kittel
What really gives this allegory depth is your understanding of your own feelings and how you want your best friend to know... We are always stronger together... when two or more are gathered in His name... He lifts us up.

I recieved this saying the other day - be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is facing some kind of battle... Psalm 91. -Kat
2/26/2005 c1 230lovelikeamixtape
Amazing work. That's about all there is to say. I love it.. keep writing, for God's sake! =)
1/3/2005 c1 A friend
Sounds like a warped dream
12/22/2004 c1 6Lisa0211
Hey, i liked it. its a great exercise too. it definitely expressed your feelings about the Lord well. me and another writer. sxy-princess. we're writing a story about a girl coming to the Lord and ppl who alreayd know him struggling to keep doing so. if you would like to read it and let us know. It's called Finding Love. but great short. ~Lisa~
8/6/2003 c1 tobythorne
I'm commenting here because you commented on my essay. A comment for a comment. :) Plus, I liked this. I could almost feel your comfort and peace at the end of the story...It was nice to imagine being able to fully believe, without a doubt, in something. It must make you feel very confident and secure. I'm glad you're able to believe in something with all your heart, even though there is no proof whatsoever of it's existance. Me, personally, I overthink everything, and would probably doubt the existance of a box even if it was sitting right in front of me.

Keep writing!
7/30/2003 c1 19AlahanTao
Hmm, pretty good, but it feels a bit forced. Unless it's really good, stuff u were forced to write is rarely worth posting.

Write more poems please!

~AlahanTao
7/21/2003 c1 5ChildOfGod07
That's a really amazing story. Sounds like something I might write. I'm so glad you're a Christian! Continue writing for Him. God bless!

Amy :o)
7/14/2003 c1 22NicholeS
Wow! That was really good. I did something like that in Religion class but we were on a beach. But the idea was the same. This was really good and I'm glad that there are so many people out there that have Jesus in their life.

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