for Within9/21/2003 c1 
3Stranger Than Fiction
Hey, I really like this. I agree with what Blithe said about identifying. Only problem i found was that the rhyme was kinda just thrown all over and hard to follow sometimes. nevertheless, it's good. (oh, thanks for reviewing my story. i almsot forgot that was the reason I was reading your poems anyway. ;))
3Stranger Than FictionHey, I really like this. I agree with what Blithe said about identifying. Only problem i found was that the rhyme was kinda just thrown all over and hard to follow sometimes. nevertheless, it's good. (oh, thanks for reviewing my story. i almsot forgot that was the reason I was reading your poems anyway. ;))
7/25/2003 c1 7Fuzzy Blue Elf Lover
Good poem. Very insightful into what's behind the human countenance. One reason why I think I like this poem is that I can relate to it. Also, although a little unusual, your rhyme scheme works well and flows very gracefully. Perfect poem for a live reading.
7Fuzzy Blue Elf LoverGood poem. Very insightful into what's behind the human countenance. One reason why I think I like this poem is that I can relate to it. Also, although a little unusual, your rhyme scheme works well and flows very gracefully. Perfect poem for a live reading.