for Midnight Sky8/8/2003 c1 Priscilla
Okay, DEFINATELY short
Okay, DEFINATELY short
7/31/2003 c1 
23UnknownWanderer
Very good. Very descriptive. For a second I thought I was looking a my profile page because I have a poem with the same name. =P
23UnknownWandererVery good. Very descriptive. For a second I thought I was looking a my profile page because I have a poem with the same name. =P
7/20/2003 c1 81Ultimate Schuyler
This is great. I loved the first and third lines, but the imagery for the second line didn't seem to go with the others... that's just me, of course, it's a wonderful haiku. Keep writing.
81Ultimate SchuylerThis is great. I loved the first and third lines, but the imagery for the second line didn't seem to go with the others... that's just me, of course, it's a wonderful haiku. Keep writing.
7/14/2003 c1 13Emily Sedlock
its very cute. in fact i like it. my favorite work is abyss. that added to the liking. short poems arent usually a favorite of mine, but this is nice. ^_~
13Emily Sedlockits very cute. in fact i like it. my favorite work is abyss. that added to the liking. short poems arent usually a favorite of mine, but this is nice. ^_~