for Love is8/27/2004 c1 
72Earthbound Angel 49
you have an impressive comand with words. The rythem and exotic style you use is definatly wonderful in this poem.
~Ebony
72Earthbound Angel 49you have an impressive comand with words. The rythem and exotic style you use is definatly wonderful in this poem.
~Ebony
4/28/2004 c1 4Fumiko Ishihala
Pshh~ It's not that sappy. I like it. A lot of Descriptions...but the form of poetry...I forgot.. using shapes and indenting a lot to form a curvy pattern..but I'm stupid. ^^;; wonderful use of words.
4Fumiko IshihalaPshh~ It's not that sappy. I like it. A lot of Descriptions...but the form of poetry...I forgot.. using shapes and indenting a lot to form a curvy pattern..but I'm stupid. ^^;; wonderful use of words.
3/6/2004 c1 43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife
Beautiful choice of words.I really enjoyed reading this...so I'll keep on reading more of your work.Its great!
43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLifeBeautiful choice of words.I really enjoyed reading this...so I'll keep on reading more of your work.Its great!
11/8/2003 c1 64Samara-chan
That was really pretty... both negative and positive feelings were well described... your poems are always calming. Nice :)
And... I just noticed this! You have a poem called Immortality which I reviewed, and I wrote a poem called Immortality yesterday :| EEps, sorry, I wasn't copying you, I usually write a poem and name is after, and in the middle of it sounded like immortality ^^' Your's is better anyway :P
64Samara-chanThat was really pretty... both negative and positive feelings were well described... your poems are always calming. Nice :)
And... I just noticed this! You have a poem called Immortality which I reviewed, and I wrote a poem called Immortality yesterday :| EEps, sorry, I wasn't copying you, I usually write a poem and name is after, and in the middle of it sounded like immortality ^^' Your's is better anyway :P
11/7/2003 c1 39Kurare
For a sappy-but-not-really poem, I like this a lot. 'The brightest night/ and the darkest light' is a really powerful way to start and finish it, and having it at the beginning and end sends a strong sense through the whole thing. Nicely done, kamikaze!
39KurareFor a sappy-but-not-really poem, I like this a lot. 'The brightest night/ and the darkest light' is a really powerful way to start and finish it, and having it at the beginning and end sends a strong sense through the whole thing. Nicely done, kamikaze!
9/20/2003 c1 28Arayuldawen
I like this. The repetition of Love is was really neat. I like the oxymorons-brightest night, darkest light. Nice job ^_^
~Arayuldawen~
28ArayuldawenI like this. The repetition of Love is was really neat. I like the oxymorons-brightest night, darkest light. Nice job ^_^
~Arayuldawen~
8/19/2003 c1 14Dirty Wallpaper
interesting, i really liked the format, it gave the poem an interesting "love interrupted" sort of texture, weird i know, but it gave the poem a touch of insanity, interrupted thought, quite cool, kudos.
14Dirty Wallpaperinteresting, i really liked the format, it gave the poem an interesting "love interrupted" sort of texture, weird i know, but it gave the poem a touch of insanity, interrupted thought, quite cool, kudos.
7/20/2003 c1 57tofujunky
"Constructive criticism greatly appreciated.", I'm sorry but I don't have any. It's . . . just . . . perfect.
57tofujunky"Constructive criticism greatly appreciated.", I'm sorry but I don't have any. It's . . . just . . . perfect.