for It's Nights Like This One8/27/2003 c1 
8Edana
Wow, I liked it. Short and bittersweet with a lot of pure emotion. I like the images that you used at the beginning, and how you repeated them at the end but with more sinister tones. The moon in the night sky also created a kind of depressive mood for the narrator's words. All in all it was a well written piece ^_^
8EdanaWow, I liked it. Short and bittersweet with a lot of pure emotion. I like the images that you used at the beginning, and how you repeated them at the end but with more sinister tones. The moon in the night sky also created a kind of depressive mood for the narrator's words. All in all it was a well written piece ^_^
7/29/2003 c1 Savak
Oh, now that's some very nice description, especially at the beginning. There are a few little hiccups grammatically and it was a bit too short (I got the gist of what you were talking about, but not the whole idea). Other than that it was lovely.
Oh, now that's some very nice description, especially at the beginning. There are a few little hiccups grammatically and it was a bit too short (I got the gist of what you were talking about, but not the whole idea). Other than that it was lovely.