
10/14/2003 c1
22Non-existent Puritanism
You really have a way of making a poem flow gracefully in each other. I think you're poem in a short, but in an equally profound way explained a thought, which other writers have used a whole book for.

You really have a way of making a poem flow gracefully in each other. I think you're poem in a short, but in an equally profound way explained a thought, which other writers have used a whole book for.
7/16/2003 c1
96AutumnRhapsody
Sad poem, but I like it...that's kind of the way I feel. But in the second stanza, wouldn't "loose" be "lose"?

Sad poem, but I like it...that's kind of the way I feel. But in the second stanza, wouldn't "loose" be "lose"?