for Bubble Girl10/14/2003 c1 
22Non-existent Puritanism
I' ve said it before I'm not a poem expert, but I for one believe that this poem did have something special to it. Good job.
22Non-existent PuritanismI' ve said it before I'm not a poem expert, but I for one believe that this poem did have something special to it. Good job.
7/16/2003 c1 142youguessedit
I think this is a poem whose writer doesn't realize it's enormity. It's actually a truly great metaphor for the way that our world is actually going. Many of the words you speak have to be picked apart to find their potential meaning. And that's great! A poem so full of these little hidden metaphors is an absolute gem. I also like the rhythm of it. The rhyming is just great. If rhyming really is a matter of luck, then I must congratulate you on being so fortunate! Good job!
142youguesseditI think this is a poem whose writer doesn't realize it's enormity. It's actually a truly great metaphor for the way that our world is actually going. Many of the words you speak have to be picked apart to find their potential meaning. And that's great! A poem so full of these little hidden metaphors is an absolute gem. I also like the rhythm of it. The rhyming is just great. If rhyming really is a matter of luck, then I must congratulate you on being so fortunate! Good job!