7/20/2003 c2 flying blind
great job so far, cant wait to read more

7/20/2003 c2 13Faded Soulfire
Hey! You finally update again. And this chapter seems even more detailed than the last. What I mean is that there were more 'larger' words used in this chapter, which made it tons of fun to read. Ha, your probably sitting there going *Andrea is insane* etc...And I'm sitting here praising you lol. What a weird person I am. Anyway, I didn't see any errors this chapter so I'll continue on with the actual review part of the story.

Don't ask why, but I absolutely loved the first paragraph for some weird reason beyond me. And I learned something that I may have forgot or may have never heard before. Jen is not a morning person. Hey, I actually learned something. Hopefully I don't forget that little piece of information. You never know when it may become important, even if I highly doubt that it will. So she throws the alarm clock out the window? Well, I guess that is one approach. At least you don't have to hear the shrill ringing of the noise maker anymore..Haha, someone cursing back up to her. Now, that amused me because I most definitely see something like that happening in real life.

What an interesting day Jen has had. Just walking out in front of traffic and not giving a damn. Go girl! LOL. It seems like she got in a bit of trouble this time around...haha, well at least she got there before her patient arrived, which is good enough for me. So is he basically making the threat that if she comes to work late again that she's gone? Well, that is sort of the impression I get, but who know...I may be completely wrong, which has been proven true a bunch of times. I don't know why, but I really don't like the receptionist for some bizarre reason. I feel like she is a just argh..annoying, yeah thats it, annoying.

OMG OMG OMG! Who is it that she knows? IT can't be what's her name...umm, Amanda I think. I'm horrible with names but her really good friend. If I'm completely wrong, forgive me for my lack of a brain early this afternoon. My brother had three of his friends sleep over last night and I barely got any sleep and I'm basically a grouch for the most part. And to make things worse, I'm writing this review while my eye waters...Yeah, i got something in it like an eye lash or something and the damn thing won't come out...grr! I got it. Thank god...but now my eye is irritated and Ima stop talking now because it is probably annoying you very much that I don't shut up but I have to top my last review lol..I hope I make it to k this time around...I'm really trying to think of more to say...And you better keep updating your other stories cuz I won't leave you alone until you do *enter doctor evil laugh* Yeah, randomness rules so much...wish I had something cool and random to say too but I'm bad at thinking up things anyway.

So, you better update soon Julia. Hey, you got a cliffy, a way to keep me wanting more...Even if you don't have that many, you don't want to overdo it sometimes like I do. But it is fun making the reviewers suffer for a while. Shows if they are dedicated to the story or if they just read it for other reasons I won't address..SO I get to suffer. So cool. I think I am the only one of your reviewers that thinks it is amusing to see others complain for another chapter. Ha, I mean, I can wait because I'm patient but it doesn't look like you have that many that are patient..So see, you gotta update something soon now. Look at this review. I am dead serious when I say that this is the longest review I've EVER submitted on fp.com. Feel special very special.

Well, I'm going to have to cut it short again because I don't have anything else to say besides I hope you update again in a while or else...I'll..j/k I don't have any good threats anyway lol. And I wouldn't threaten you anyone. Ok, must stop rambling. SO, I guess I'll see you next chapter, k?

your very insane reviewer, Andrea

7/17/2003 c1 8Tasha Bean
good job so far. i can't wait to see what happens in this story :)

7/17/2003 c1 14Orenji Yume
yah! this story came out soon after u ended the other one...i tink. ^^ well anywayz, glad they're back together. but i shud tink tt more is to come their way...oh wells, pls update soon!

7/16/2003 c1 6Onion Ring
I spent like two hours readng this and the two novels before it, and I must say you put a lot of work into ths. I doint know if i could dedcate myself to one set of characters that long. as you progress throug the chapters your writing is obviously improving and that is good and sdince you seen the characters endure so uch you know their personalities quite well. I wonder what is going to happen in this book. I am just wondering wh Shawn is suicidal in first place, what provokes him to be sucdal and how she can change him so much... and i would think he would see a therapist... But yeah, whatever. keep on writing. and thanks fr reviewing my fiction i posted up some more chapters.

7/16/2003 c1 LOOKITME
VIOLA! ANOTHER MASTERPEICE UNVEILED! I can already tell this is gonna be good..ohh yess. and shes gonna find out what happenned in the next chappie, yes? who the guy was at the hospital? mooahmooah! see yah in a limo latah!

-Meh O_o