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7/21/2003 c1 64not sure yet
well written and interesting, love the flow on this one and the last line is excellent, nicely done
7/17/2003 c1 Angele Raye
this is really good. The flow is excellent. I like the idea as well.

*Angele Raye*
7/17/2003 c1 AVIGON
"I not by your side" seemed a bit strange, but I like how all the verses are so short that it seems like the poem "hops" a bit. Wait, that didn't come out right.

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