for Autumn Leaves10/11/2003 c1 
37Sunflower Philosophy
I really, really, really loved this poem! :) :) :) I loved these lines in particular: "...always graced by morning dew" "And a butterfly's wings, through a child's eyes/Are never quite as small" *hums contentedly to herself* Very optimistic and well done!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
37Sunflower PhilosophyI really, really, really loved this poem! :) :) :) I loved these lines in particular: "...always graced by morning dew" "And a butterfly's wings, through a child's eyes/Are never quite as small" *hums contentedly to herself* Very optimistic and well done!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
9/12/2003 c1 3autumn leaves and oranges
that was very nice...
i liked how you described the butterfly wings and the footprints...very thoughtful...
i like it alot...
and also, i have a poem that's also called "autumn leaves" lol
ur reader,
autumn leaves and oranges
3autumn leaves and orangesthat was very nice...
i liked how you described the butterfly wings and the footprints...very thoughtful...
i like it alot...
and also, i have a poem that's also called "autumn leaves" lol
ur reader,
autumn leaves and oranges
8/9/2003 c1 34Wasted Postage
WOW! This was inspiring! Indeed! I think this may be one of my favorite pieces! yep it's official, this is going on my favorites list! I loved how you used autumn as a time to start over. Brilliant!
~*~AbunaiChikara
34Wasted PostageWOW! This was inspiring! Indeed! I think this may be one of my favorite pieces! yep it's official, this is going on my favorites list! I loved how you used autumn as a time to start over. Brilliant!
~*~AbunaiChikara
7/17/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
You had some great details here. Plus, this had much wisdom.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100You had some great details here. Plus, this had much wisdom.
~Heart of the Sword
7/17/2003 c1 PainKiller
Beautiful... I thought that this was one of your better works. I'm not entirely sure why, but to me, this poem flowed marvelously. Your ending was just perfect, and dripping with truth. Excellent work, once again. You've got an amazing talent. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Beautiful... I thought that this was one of your better works. I'm not entirely sure why, but to me, this poem flowed marvelously. Your ending was just perfect, and dripping with truth. Excellent work, once again. You've got an amazing talent. Thanks for sharing it with me.