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7/18/2003 c1 176DefianceIsMe
I'm in a situation where I cannot utter that word...well considering I said goodbye (final kind) and he blocked me...then...I don't think I can say hi now can I?...you very well don't write "hi" in an email and click send...anyways...great poem...hi is a hard word to say...when you're unsure of it's reception.
7/17/2003 c1 shesgone
o i liked this, a poem about something so little that could lead to something big ;) nice
7/17/2003 c1 Transparent Eyes
I love the style of this poem. The way all the lines aren't complete sentences give the reader a nervous tone and that's exactly what you are trying to express. "Hi" was great at the end. It made the poem feel like all this pressure was built up was finally released. Good job.
7/17/2003 c1 36Kittle
Great poem. Establishes emotion well.

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