for Goodnight2/17/2013 c1 Claire
Perhaps it's because I tend to have a revenge streak, but I'd really like to have seen the guys reaction to her death/if it changed him and perhaps her family. Then again, I feel like it'd ruin what seems so perfect. More detail would have been nice, It is rated M so it's safe to put in a little more, felt just too rushed, though I know your trying to avoid it being too horrific. Overall it was really well done. :)
Perhaps it's because I tend to have a revenge streak, but I'd really like to have seen the guys reaction to her death/if it changed him and perhaps her family. Then again, I feel like it'd ruin what seems so perfect. More detail would have been nice, It is rated M so it's safe to put in a little more, felt just too rushed, though I know your trying to avoid it being too horrific. Overall it was really well done. :)
1/26/2007 c1 UchihaSakuraXItachi
Wow.. that was so deep... i loved it! lol I feel like a twisted kind of person for reading things like this but i don't care. i am slightly twisted, i suppose. i write about suicide every time i write a story, well, not for school at least. for school i make up things, you know what i mean?
Wow.. that was so deep... i loved it! lol I feel like a twisted kind of person for reading things like this but i don't care. i am slightly twisted, i suppose. i write about suicide every time i write a story, well, not for school at least. for school i make up things, you know what i mean?
6/3/2006 c1 mrsgoodnews
how could she die if she narrated the story? just askin, loved it otherwise!
how could she die if she narrated the story? just askin, loved it otherwise!
12/2/2004 c1 
90poetic abortion
I always love sad story. And this by far was one of the best. Keep it up !
~ Noelle ~
90poetic abortionI always love sad story. And this by far was one of the best. Keep it up !
~ Noelle ~
8/6/2004 c1 Out-Of-Reality
I did like it! It hit a lot of personal points for me but I guess that's what a good story is suppossed to do. It was sad of course but I like sad stories. The way she said goodnight right before she jumped just seemed right. Awesome story!
I did like it! It hit a lot of personal points for me but I guess that's what a good story is suppossed to do. It was sad of course but I like sad stories. The way she said goodnight right before she jumped just seemed right. Awesome story!
4/28/2004 c1 Jenn
Totally awesome!
Totally awesome!
1/2/2004 c1 54Werecat99
Dark, but well written. Although I'd prefer it if she had gotten her revenge instead of jumping off the bridge.
54Werecat99Dark, but well written. Although I'd prefer it if she had gotten her revenge instead of jumping off the bridge.
11/30/2003 c1 Steppenwoelfin
Rapists are just as evil as murderers. They ruin the victim's life - it's a mental sort of murder which you desribe very well in your story. Excellent work; it scared me out of my wits.
Rapists are just as evil as murderers. They ruin the victim's life - it's a mental sort of murder which you desribe very well in your story. Excellent work; it scared me out of my wits.
10/30/2003 c1 2peppermint-kiss
nice! only wish that it could have been longer. david's such an evil bastard. i hate him!
2peppermint-kissnice! only wish that it could have been longer. david's such an evil bastard. i hate him!
10/18/2003 c1 1Princess Rayna
THAT WAS TRUELY bEAUTIFUL!
You have a talent with words and emotions!
I really like it, i do. It wasn't that short as it looked but WOW.
1Princess RaynaTHAT WAS TRUELY bEAUTIFUL!
You have a talent with words and emotions!
I really like it, i do. It wasn't that short as it looked but WOW.
8/20/2003 c1 40R. Blade
OMG! u didnt tell me about this story! well.. u probably did.. but i just forgot.. ::shrugs:: twas great. ::irish accent:: i feel her pain. ::fake tear:: it was really cool. i dont wanna take those tests tomorrow! did ur paint come off? when i took a bath.. i just let water drip down the spots on my arm.. the the red streamed down and it looked so cool. n-e way, i loved it.. as usual. hope ur having fun at steph's! talk to u tomorrow.. bye!
~scars~
::whispers.. bobo..::
40R. BladeOMG! u didnt tell me about this story! well.. u probably did.. but i just forgot.. ::shrugs:: twas great. ::irish accent:: i feel her pain. ::fake tear:: it was really cool. i dont wanna take those tests tomorrow! did ur paint come off? when i took a bath.. i just let water drip down the spots on my arm.. the the red streamed down and it looked so cool. n-e way, i loved it.. as usual. hope ur having fun at steph's! talk to u tomorrow.. bye!
~scars~
::whispers.. bobo..::