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7/17/2004 c1 AmbiguityLotus
lol-first of all, i don't like monday's either.. second of all, i also got dumped via email, and i'm a girl, but i can totally relate to how you feel...
and finally.. this prose you've written is wonderful.. emotions, songs, a typical bad day going worser every seconds.. if this site has a rating, i'll give you a 5 as best! :)
1/15/2004 c2 150SpawnMeister666
This is an awesome piece of writing. What more can I say?
Spawny
12/8/2003 c1 3Danny Barefoot
Erm, right. Keep smiling, no sudden movements...I have wondered occasionally if Aspergers syndrome really makes for this sort of thing. So happens I am Aspergers myself, incidently, have you met an Aspergers Maths genius yet? I have neither Maths genius, nor a chance in hell, alas, of a relationship like yours-gives me a deep warm glow, actually, knowing someone who can manage it.

The story (If that hasn't got YOU edging towards the door yet!) well, there are websites out there with this in spades, but I'm not sure the writers were angry enough to write anything good. The beginning was really poginient, hope things are better with people now. The song, sounded very nasty, the rest, if I didn't know better, you're even writing tongue-in-cheek about shootings. Soul-rending stuff, you just never seem like you'd kill people, and that makes it desperately powerful. Shoot them in the abdomen? really twisted in mine.
I've got this wierd thing where I feel guilty about liking 'The curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time', what about you? I may have lead you astray somewhat by calling it humour, but did you get to the end of my Neville fic, perchance on a bionic stomach?
8/12/2003 c1 julieta1314
damn, this is very well written. it has some deep emotion behind it that really comes out. cool
8/4/2003 c1 Amber39
James,

If it makes you any happier, I won't mind becoming your girlfriend again.
7/24/2003 c1 Jave Harron
Creative, yet twisted story... Keep it up.
7/24/2003 c1 10Devabbi
*whistles* who...harshness with a cup of coolness, awesome job. and check your mail, bud.
7/20/2003 c1 Pisces13
James,

I've written something for you to read.

It is a song called Out with James.

You really will like it.

Go and have a read of it.
7/19/2003 c1 Amber39
James,

This a sad song and well I thought I should write you a review. I love as a friend and reading made me feel awful about, that I don't know what to do now.

My story I think will be called:

The Adventures of the secret agents.

I think need a better title, so I will ask you if have one?

Thanks

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