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8/1/2003 c1 8DivineVelvet15
As small and pointless as that was, It was somehow really deep. Only in this morbid little way, but, that was pretty cool
7/31/2003 c1 37handle187
Hahaha, cute. This poem is original, I like the irony. To see a soap bubble wrapped up in spider silk, hm ...
7/31/2003 c1 167E. Hisifithith
Hey! this is so good! it makes me want to sing the song upendi from lion king 2 i think... I don't know why though! lol!

Have you seen the movie Serendipity? it's really good! yeah...

I really like this poem! I think the first line might have six syllables... unless child is a one syllable word... i always thought it had two though! and also... serendipity means chance, or fate... you know? maybe that's what your poem is getting at but I don't see it...

otherwise! this is an awesome piece! great job!


Thanks for the review!
7/30/2003 c1 44Strawberry Chapstick
Wow... So short, but so deep!
7/20/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
This was a great image.

~Heart of the Sword
7/19/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Wow, that's just so deep!
7/18/2003 c1 35Mime
I love serendipity! Great piece!
7/18/2003 c1 3Kakeiro
... I'm sure that was deep, but i just don't get it ^_^; It was still good though!

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