for Serendipity8/1/2003 c1 
8DivineVelvet15
As small and pointless as that was, It was somehow really deep. Only in this morbid little way, but, that was pretty cool
8DivineVelvet15As small and pointless as that was, It was somehow really deep. Only in this morbid little way, but, that was pretty cool
7/31/2003 c1 37handle187
Hahaha, cute. This poem is original, I like the irony. To see a soap bubble wrapped up in spider silk, hm ...
37handle187Hahaha, cute. This poem is original, I like the irony. To see a soap bubble wrapped up in spider silk, hm ...
7/31/2003 c1 167E. Hisifithith
Hey! this is so good! it makes me want to sing the song upendi from lion king 2 i think... I don't know why though! lol!
Have you seen the movie Serendipity? it's really good! yeah...
I really like this poem! I think the first line might have six syllables... unless child is a one syllable word... i always thought it had two though! and also... serendipity means chance, or fate... you know? maybe that's what your poem is getting at but I don't see it...
otherwise! this is an awesome piece! great job!
K.F.
Thanks for the review!
167E. HisifithithHey! this is so good! it makes me want to sing the song upendi from lion king 2 i think... I don't know why though! lol!
Have you seen the movie Serendipity? it's really good! yeah...
I really like this poem! I think the first line might have six syllables... unless child is a one syllable word... i always thought it had two though! and also... serendipity means chance, or fate... you know? maybe that's what your poem is getting at but I don't see it...
otherwise! this is an awesome piece! great job!
K.F.
Thanks for the review!