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4/11/2004 c1 HarryPotterSNL
haha! Cute! It sounds like an advertisement for Fanfiction.net. I can totally here that on the radio!
7/18/2003 c1 Cheese and DG
lol-that's some great stuff! Lol. That was so normal it was funny! But, you know what? I'm really sad that they deleted the Musical Groups section...i just about cried when they did! But yea, i'll read this when you update -k-

RoCk On*~
7/18/2003 c1 26Froberg
I have to agree with Echoes. Really, it's boring. Try and spice it up with a plot, write something interesting, make the dialogue a little realistic, time the dialogue a little better, try... No, you know what? Forget about this story. I hate telling you this, but I really don't think that you can save it. *sorry*

However, I won't discourage you from writing anything else! Just... practice, I suppose. And remember the two most important rules: 1) make it interesting and 2) make realistic characters (that includes dialogue)
7/18/2003 c1 4One True Pirate
It's a little boring, don't you think?

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