
1/13/2009 c7 Dent
You updated! I didn't expect an update this soon, for some reason I thought it would take a couple of weeks or something.
Great update, I can't wait to see how things go at the meeting.
You updated! I didn't expect an update this soon, for some reason I thought it would take a couple of weeks or something.
Great update, I can't wait to see how things go at the meeting.
1/10/2009 c7 Shadow1290
I like this so far but please don't let this be like the last one.. where he was forced to mate and he got pregnant. I hated it.. I mean it was a good idea but that just turned my stomach.
The fact that he was forced into a mating and not only that but he was now forced to have a child at his age... and a child he didn't even want with a person who not only treats him like shit, but he doesn't even like!
please, again, don't let this be like the other one.
MORE SOON
-shadow
I like this so far but please don't let this be like the last one.. where he was forced to mate and he got pregnant. I hated it.. I mean it was a good idea but that just turned my stomach.
The fact that he was forced into a mating and not only that but he was now forced to have a child at his age... and a child he didn't even want with a person who not only treats him like shit, but he doesn't even like!
please, again, don't let this be like the other one.
MORE SOON
-shadow
1/5/2009 c7
44RikoRishodeathangeloflight
Yay you finally updated. And my review is late. Sorry. So sorry. I saw the update and then I just totally forgot about it. XD Wow, it's getting really interesting now. I can't wait to read more!

Yay you finally updated. And my review is late. Sorry. So sorry. I saw the update and then I just totally forgot about it. XD Wow, it's getting really interesting now. I can't wait to read more!
1/5/2009 c7 dafne22
Really interesting...you are doing great job :-) Nicely written. I can“t wait for a new chapter, so hurry up :-)
Really interesting...you are doing great job :-) Nicely written. I can“t wait for a new chapter, so hurry up :-)
1/1/2009 c1
4Kimera77
Extremely good plot. I adore the characters traits, and hope for regular updates from now on! I need them!

Extremely good plot. I adore the characters traits, and hope for regular updates from now on! I need them!
1/1/2009 c7 blackrose214
There is quite a number of changes in this chapter, hm? But as far as I can tell you`re doing a superb job at editing again. Keep it up and update soon aain, plz!
There is quite a number of changes in this chapter, hm? But as far as I can tell you`re doing a superb job at editing again. Keep it up and update soon aain, plz!
1/1/2009 c7
25SweetPseudonym
I'm so glad you're still writing this! Clay and Devon's "relationship" is one of my favorite kinds ;D So I hope you update soon! I'm anxious to see what happens to everyone :O!

I'm so glad you're still writing this! Clay and Devon's "relationship" is one of my favorite kinds ;D So I hope you update soon! I'm anxious to see what happens to everyone :O!
1/1/2009 c7
5TheLadyPendragon
Yay, an update. :) I feel bad for poor Devon. Clay needs to chill. It isn't his fault, just like Clay's grandfather intoned. No wonder he dislikes the old guy. He's actually reasonable. xDD I can't wait for more.

Yay, an update. :) I feel bad for poor Devon. Clay needs to chill. It isn't his fault, just like Clay's grandfather intoned. No wonder he dislikes the old guy. He's actually reasonable. xDD I can't wait for more.
11/9/2008 c6 Kelsier
I really like this story a lot.I found it while going through a list of recommended original fics on aarin. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you update soon.
Thanks
I really like this story a lot.I found it while going through a list of recommended original fics on aarin. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you update soon.
Thanks
9/8/2008 c6 Johnny101
Love the new chapter! Can't wait to see how the plot is going to go next. Poor Clay...and Devon.
Love the new chapter! Can't wait to see how the plot is going to go next. Poor Clay...and Devon.