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2/9/2004 c1 41Sadira
Wow. I love this. I love the rhythm and the way it's broken up. I really got the feeling of how 'she' is torn. Amazingly expressed.
8/2/2003 c1 38The Teaspoon Faery
This is the kind of poem that I would love to say I wrote. Unfortunately for me, that honour's yours. I just discovered your writing and you're going straight on my Favourite Authors list. A very haunting, yet in places almost matter-of-fact, poem. Love it. Touched a deep chord - and that's not a pun.
7/18/2003 c1 bleak reality
Beautiful, but painful at the same time. (I hate it when I can't fully understand a poem.) The effect of this is like honey on thorns.

More gorgeous writing kid.
7/18/2003 c1 4Eleanore Wravyn
I'm kind of speechless.. it's very different in the format from anything else I've ever read.. It was just so beautiful.. I really like the last two parts.. "You bury it all but somehow inbetween then and now nothing's changed. It scares her to think nothing ever will."... Fantastic.. Absolutely adored it.

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