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1/16/2004 c1 Shi no Yume
Wow...that's wonderful, keep up the great work!
8/30/2003 c1 35insanemonkeyboy
I liked this poem... it isn't too often that I come across poetry that I can relate to... but I can definitely relate to that (except the girl part o.o) anyway... nice job
8/26/2003 c1 Winter Requiem
Hey, its me, Nameless Wanderer in my account thingy. once again, I LOVE THIS POEM!
8/24/2003 c1 Human Wasteland
*adds story to fav list*

Yet another brilliant poem. Moving, emotional, everything. Love it. Why didn't I think of this first? *Talent Sucking Orb*
8/1/2003 c1 21A-Million-Thoughts
This is possibly the best song i have ever read. I love your writing style and i totally agree with the lyrics. If you have Msn messenger then i would love to talk to you. Liek minded people always get on
7/22/2003 c1 anon63
"I'm tired of living a lonely life

Tired of worshipping the blade of a knife"

Those lines stood out.

Toward the beginning i was sharply reminded of Reflection from Mulan.

Enjoyed it a lot, intriguing theme.
7/19/2003 c1 10Inoperative
love it...just love it...i'll come back and review later, but at the moment i'm really tired, so there you go...

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