3/15/2007 c1 snow
poor girl, she don't deserve that.
poor girl, she don't deserve that.
2/14/2007 c17 56from beneath the bell jar
Yeah...definitely crying again. You have a way with writing moving death scenes.God it's so sad.
Yeah...definitely crying again. You have a way with writing moving death scenes.God it's so sad.
2/14/2007 c14 from beneath the bell jar
Oh my GOD! What a lion king moment. Wonderful writing, how it tied back into the beginning. wow.
Oh my GOD! What a lion king moment. Wonderful writing, how it tied back into the beginning. wow.
2/14/2007 c12 from beneath the bell jar
Oh, this chapter made me cry. This really is a beautiful story of love.
Oh, this chapter made me cry. This really is a beautiful story of love.
2/14/2007 c3 from beneath the bell jar
Very good so far. Written very sophisticatedly. I like how much information you've maneuvered into these first 3 chapters, already we know so much of her personality. I also already love the prince. Anyway, very well-written. Very believable. On to read more.
Very good so far. Written very sophisticatedly. I like how much information you've maneuvered into these first 3 chapters, already we know so much of her personality. I also already love the prince. Anyway, very well-written. Very believable. On to read more.
12/26/2006 c31 1decadebydecade
Very well written. (When Jake thought she was dead, I got that stomach-dropping-to-the-floor feeling that angsty stuff makes me feel-even though I knew perfectly well that this story has a happy ending...hope that makes sense) Needless to say I liked it a lot, its a lovely Cinderella-type story. Great job! Can't wait for the sequel. (Although I may refrain from reading that one until its completed-if this one made me feel that angst-induced-sensation despite your assurance of a happy ending I'm almost positive I'd have to read the sequel all at once-as that is the case with me and all angst-type readings.)
Very well written. (When Jake thought she was dead, I got that stomach-dropping-to-the-floor feeling that angsty stuff makes me feel-even though I knew perfectly well that this story has a happy ending...hope that makes sense) Needless to say I liked it a lot, its a lovely Cinderella-type story. Great job! Can't wait for the sequel. (Although I may refrain from reading that one until its completed-if this one made me feel that angst-induced-sensation despite your assurance of a happy ending I'm almost positive I'd have to read the sequel all at once-as that is the case with me and all angst-type readings.)
12/8/2006 c31 OoohLookACat
It's a good story, i really like it.
Although a little cliche`d...it's still good.
Very Cute bits by the way and *gasp* SYLVIA that Beyotch!
Serves her right to be exiled!
Some things just get me so riled up..haha =]
Good story nonetheless
It's a good story, i really like it.
Although a little cliche`d...it's still good.
Very Cute bits by the way and *gasp* SYLVIA that Beyotch!
Serves her right to be exiled!
Some things just get me so riled up..haha =]
Good story nonetheless
9/30/2006 c14 izzo17
It's so beautiful! I love it! I'm in love with Prince Jakob and Anton...ah...aw aw aw..
It's so beautiful! I love it! I'm in love with Prince Jakob and Anton...ah...aw aw aw..
9/27/2006 c6 outsomniac
hm they have like no problems...he fell in love with her really quick..even if it was a few weeksstill, very good chapter!
hm they have like no problems...he fell in love with her really quick..even if it was a few weeksstill, very good chapter!
9/27/2006 c3 outsomniac
um...its pretty good...but that was sorta weird...hes like omg shes so pretty1! i love her, i want to kiss her! lol
um...its pretty good...but that was sorta weird...hes like omg shes so pretty1! i love her, i want to kiss her! lol
6/27/2006 c31 atreyu love
SEQUEL!
SEQUEL!