
7/19/2003 c1 lostrunner
really really nice flow. i like it. expresses your emotions greatly.]
i hope your really not thinking of suicide though.
really really nice flow. i like it. expresses your emotions greatly.]
i hope your really not thinking of suicide though.
7/19/2003 c1
49recalcitrant
hey that was a fuckin awesome poem. i love the transition of time through seasons i did that in my poem "hurt" although a bit more subtle. great poem. r+r mine if u want

hey that was a fuckin awesome poem. i love the transition of time through seasons i did that in my poem "hurt" although a bit more subtle. great poem. r+r mine if u want
7/19/2003 c1
12Blades of Ice
Wow. That was an amazing poem. It was well written and full of pain and sadness. Wow!

Wow. That was an amazing poem. It was well written and full of pain and sadness. Wow!
7/19/2003 c1
1VampiricSacrifice
wow, this is such a good story. its REALLY good, and amazing, and all the otehr good wrods. I love the change of season with the change of emotions, and the angels, all brought into one poem. Originaly, clever, and sad. Everything perfect in apoem.
:)

wow, this is such a good story. its REALLY good, and amazing, and all the otehr good wrods. I love the change of season with the change of emotions, and the angels, all brought into one poem. Originaly, clever, and sad. Everything perfect in apoem.
:)
7/19/2003 c1 Rattus-Rattus
Good poem. seriously, I enjoyed it. The angels add a nice touch to it heh. Well done. :)
Good poem. seriously, I enjoyed it. The angels add a nice touch to it heh. Well done. :)