Just In
for My Suicide

7/19/2003 c1 lostrunner
really really nice flow. i like it. expresses your emotions greatly.]

i hope your really not thinking of suicide though.
7/19/2003 c1 53Punky Monkey
This is great i love it!
7/19/2003 c1 49recalcitrant
hey that was a fuckin awesome poem. i love the transition of time through seasons i did that in my poem "hurt" although a bit more subtle. great poem. r+r mine if u want
7/19/2003 c1 12Blades of Ice
Wow. That was an amazing poem. It was well written and full of pain and sadness. Wow!
7/19/2003 c1 1VampiricSacrifice
wow, this is such a good story. its REALLY good, and amazing, and all the otehr good wrods. I love the change of season with the change of emotions, and the angels, all brought into one poem. Originaly, clever, and sad. Everything perfect in apoem.

7/19/2003 c1 Rattus-Rattus
Good poem. seriously, I enjoyed it. The angels add a nice touch to it heh. Well done. :)

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