7/20/2003 c1 PrettyPepperita
^_^ Wow, I really liked this. Keep up the good work! Your a wonderful writer ^_^

7/19/2003 c1 Zabella
I like it so far!

7/19/2003 c1 3alianne
This could get pretty good. The only thing is that it's somewhat confusing to read when you don't start new paragraphs for a new person talking, it gets difficult to differentiate who's talking.

Keep it up!