for no title really9/1/2003 c1 
19Andromeda
oh don't say you hate your poetry! I think it's beautiful! I really and truly liked this poem. There were a couple of meter issues but I thought it was beautifully written. I like the whole idea of the moon being full of tears, that's very original! Nice job! ^_^
19Andromedaoh don't say you hate your poetry! I think it's beautiful! I really and truly liked this poem. There were a couple of meter issues but I thought it was beautifully written. I like the whole idea of the moon being full of tears, that's very original! Nice job! ^_^
8/26/2003 c1 5Vuaii
I thought this poem was really good. I especially love rhyming ones. Unrhyming ones just seem like random sentences (the fact that I write both is completely irrelevant, lol) Great job, but you might try to make it longer
5VuaiiI thought this poem was really good. I especially love rhyming ones. Unrhyming ones just seem like random sentences (the fact that I write both is completely irrelevant, lol) Great job, but you might try to make it longer
7/22/2003 c1 8Janice C. Vasquez
Cool! I liked it, even if your teacher gave you the first line, it was very original!
8Janice C. VasquezCool! I liked it, even if your teacher gave you the first line, it was very original!