for The Untitleds: Blathering On7/24/2003 c14 
56Blue SunriZe
Pretty much sums up how you feel. Good job, and when you can come review a writing of mine.
56Blue SunriZePretty much sums up how you feel. Good job, and when you can come review a writing of mine.
7/22/2003 c1 74Vivienne Cen
I like this sad Christmas poem. It reminds me that not all holidays bring happiness to all. The 'fish scales' throws the rhythm off balance but I wanted to show that she was a half human-half-fish. Hmm...I guess it wasn't necessary though ^_^ The cliches' spelling was wrong and I've forgotten to look through that. I would have mentioned more obstacles but I was a bit stuck. Writer's block ^^
74Vivienne CenI like this sad Christmas poem. It reminds me that not all holidays bring happiness to all. The 'fish scales' throws the rhythm off balance but I wanted to show that she was a half human-half-fish. Hmm...I guess it wasn't necessary though ^_^ The cliches' spelling was wrong and I've forgotten to look through that. I would have mentioned more obstacles but I was a bit stuck. Writer's block ^^