
8/18/2003 c2
14sb1
I'm so glad you continued this! I really like the way you express the feelings of the characters. I hope to see more soon, I'm so anxious to find out what happens next!

I'm so glad you continued this! I really like the way you express the feelings of the characters. I hope to see more soon, I'm so anxious to find out what happens next!
8/18/2003 c2
19NotEnough
I love it when they are in denial, they always end up making idiots out of themselves which is great! Heh.
Well, good story. Update soon.

I love it when they are in denial, they always end up making idiots out of themselves which is great! Heh.
Well, good story. Update soon.
8/3/2003 c1 Adam Burns
i think you already show strong characters and plot, and i definitely want to read more.
i think you already show strong characters and plot, and i definitely want to read more.
7/21/2003 c1 NoName8owq
I like...please continue because it was an interesting read. Thanks, love the pen name by the way.
I like...please continue because it was an interesting read. Thanks, love the pen name by the way.
7/21/2003 c1
19NotEnough
Oh, MORE MORE MORE.
Yes...look at how constructive that was...
Well..hope ya update!

Oh, MORE MORE MORE.
Yes...look at how constructive that was...
Well..hope ya update!
7/21/2003 c1 sovereign
great story! but try to make the chapters longer..it makes the update more worthwhile. hope to see more soon.
great story! but try to make the chapters longer..it makes the update more worthwhile. hope to see more soon.
7/21/2003 c1 AVIGON
The last paragraph made the story possible to continue. I don't think we'd want yet another story of a-loves-b-but-b-doesn't-love-a, but since it's not that... Do continue. ;o)
The last paragraph made the story possible to continue. I don't think we'd want yet another story of a-loves-b-but-b-doesn't-love-a, but since it's not that... Do continue. ;o)