for Beggar of the Ball3/26/2007 c14 
25V de V
Aww, such a cute story. I love it dearly. Peg is an awesome protagonist. Great job with the descriptions of Europe and clothing. They were so detailed and colorful. Glad you included many different cultures as well. Lovely! Lovely.
25V de VAww, such a cute story. I love it dearly. Peg is an awesome protagonist. Great job with the descriptions of Europe and clothing. They were so detailed and colorful. Glad you included many different cultures as well. Lovely! Lovely.
7/14/2005 c14 4Quiet One
This is a very interesting idea, though a very quick read. I cannot help but feel if you went more in depth with it, fleshed out the characters and plot a bit more, that this would improve upon it a lot. Overall, nice job.
4Quiet OneThis is a very interesting idea, though a very quick read. I cannot help but feel if you went more in depth with it, fleshed out the characters and plot a bit more, that this would improve upon it a lot. Overall, nice job.
9/28/2004 c11 3Lady Cyann
I haven't been on Fiction Press in a while, but when I finally logged in once again, I was glad to see that a new chapter of your story had been posted. What will happen now that the real Annabelle is back?
~LC~
3Lady CyannI haven't been on Fiction Press in a while, but when I finally logged in once again, I was glad to see that a new chapter of your story had been posted. What will happen now that the real Annabelle is back?
~LC~
9/25/2004 c14 Em Crosthwaite
Maybe you can do a sort-of sequel with it centering around Fredrick and Annique and how the came to being friends and marrying. I love this story, I'll review the other chapters.
Maybe you can do a sort-of sequel with it centering around Fredrick and Annique and how the came to being friends and marrying. I love this story, I'll review the other chapters.
9/18/2004 c11 passion101
Well, she's getting wut she deserves. However, if Will truly did love her, then he wouldn't care whether or not she was annebelle.
Well, she's getting wut she deserves. However, if Will truly did love her, then he wouldn't care whether or not she was annebelle.
7/28/2004 c10 Oni-no-Midori
ack! no! cliffhanger!
wonderful story and excellent description. wonder whats gonna happen :)
ack! no! cliffhanger!
wonderful story and excellent description. wonder whats gonna happen :)
7/27/2004 c10 Railee
Oh! What an evil girl she's become! She ought to feel guilty! Poor Will! I'd marry him, he sounds so cute!
I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
~*R.M.Whitaker*~
Oh! What an evil girl she's become! She ought to feel guilty! Poor Will! I'd marry him, he sounds so cute!
I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
~*R.M.Whitaker*~
7/27/2004 c10 5Autumn Pierce
I'm sorry about that! That was chapter ten from another story of mine, Baackwards Time, and I had them both saved under B, and chapter ten of Backwards Time was right after chapter nine of this story so sorry again! I fixed it.
5Autumn PierceI'm sorry about that! That was chapter ten from another story of mine, Baackwards Time, and I had them both saved under B, and chapter ten of Backwards Time was right after chapter nine of this story so sorry again! I fixed it.
7/26/2004 c10 5kitty-mao-mao
well written, check the last chapter, i think u uploaded a chapter from a different story. great story line...wow, that girl is a flirt!
5kitty-mao-maowell written, check the last chapter, i think u uploaded a chapter from a different story. great story line...wow, that girl is a flirt!
7/26/2004 c10 passion101
Uh oh...complications in paradise. I'm sure he'll get over it, i mean, they can't do anything about it.
Uh oh...complications in paradise. I'm sure he'll get over it, i mean, they can't do anything about it.
7/25/2004 c10 R.M.Whitaker
This story was really good! A few spelling errors though. And the last chapter...I think you made a mistake, it's like a totally different book. Look into that, cuz I want to know what happens in the other story!
Oh! and don't forget to check out my book, William Ingalls. The name makes it sound kind of dull, I'm thinking of changing it...
This story was really good! A few spelling errors though. And the last chapter...I think you made a mistake, it's like a totally different book. Look into that, cuz I want to know what happens in the other story!
Oh! and don't forget to check out my book, William Ingalls. The name makes it sound kind of dull, I'm thinking of changing it...
7/24/2004 c9 Autumn Pierce
Thanks so much everyone for your reviews! Lady Cyann and Liriel, thanks for yours especially, they are very encouraging! You both are wonderful writers as well, and I enjoy reading your works!
Thanks so much everyone for your reviews! Lady Cyann and Liriel, thanks for yours especially, they are very encouraging! You both are wonderful writers as well, and I enjoy reading your works!