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9/22/2003 c1 42Caitir
you apologized if the word promise would lose its meaning, but you gave it a thousand instead. wonderful. really, really wonderful.
7/31/2003 c1 AVIGON
"Promise" still holds a meaning to me... Not a very positive one, but a meaning nonetheless.

I love what you did with this poem. The good kind of repetitive, with just enough diversion as to not make it boring. Good job.
7/22/2003 c1 72CancerianQueen
This is great! Well done. I love it.

Keep writing,

~Naomi~
7/22/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
Well, that was the point, wasn't it?

I loved it. The repetitiveness was a tool, well used, anyway. It was supposed to be like that and it's good like that.

m~* Sunflower, anyone?

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