for The Evil Overlord Story2/8/2006 c4 JaveHarron
Very funny story you have here! I've tried something similar to this, Space Bores, a parody of most scifi cliches. Too bad Len never read the Evil Overlord List.
Very funny story you have here! I've tried something similar to this, Space Bores, a parody of most scifi cliches. Too bad Len never read the Evil Overlord List.
11/6/2005 c2 Sally-andersonn
I'm getting into the story now, but it just isn't enough. As in, it lacks something. I think the whole making fun of it went too far so it affected the story. (or something like that)
I'm getting into the story now, but it just isn't enough. As in, it lacks something. I think the whole making fun of it went too far so it affected the story. (or something like that)
11/6/2005 c1 Sally-andersonn
I did get the story, but it seemed to jump here, then jump to over there. It's very parodied.
I did get the story, but it seemed to jump here, then jump to over there. It's very parodied.
8/6/2003 c1 
7Lee Harvey Kennedy
Ah, this is shaping up to be a fantastic story!
I saw your review of that little "DBZ: The Next Legacy" story, and decided that I'd check you out for it. This story has the makings of becoming great. It's already very funny, the thought of a childish Evil Overlord and his six-year-old planner attempting to take over the world is great. It reminds me of that one humor list, "The Evil Overlord Handbook". You must have read that, I assume?
No complaints yet, I'm excited to read more of this story. Absolute genius.
~N
7Lee Harvey KennedyAh, this is shaping up to be a fantastic story!
I saw your review of that little "DBZ: The Next Legacy" story, and decided that I'd check you out for it. This story has the makings of becoming great. It's already very funny, the thought of a childish Evil Overlord and his six-year-old planner attempting to take over the world is great. It reminds me of that one humor list, "The Evil Overlord Handbook". You must have read that, I assume?
No complaints yet, I'm excited to read more of this story. Absolute genius.
~N
7/26/2003 c3 kuroi kenshi
lol (still laughing) good story. The dialogue is hilarious. Good job, I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^_^
p.s. about the review you left for Forsaken Revenge, well, I thought about a sequel a few months ago... but I dropped the idea. I mean... what would it be about?
lol (still laughing) good story. The dialogue is hilarious. Good job, I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^_^
p.s. about the review you left for Forsaken Revenge, well, I thought about a sequel a few months ago... but I dropped the idea. I mean... what would it be about?
7/24/2003 c1 13The Shellback
Lol, you read that article too eh? Quite entertaining. What was the name of it again? 100 Things NOT to do as an Evil Overlord? This is quite good.
13The ShellbackLol, you read that article too eh? Quite entertaining. What was the name of it again? 100 Things NOT to do as an Evil Overlord? This is quite good.
7/23/2003 c1 25ConfigurationSpace
Bahahaha! That was great! I loff Tim, he's my favorite out of all of them. Post the next chapter as soon as you possibly can, cause I wanna read more!
25ConfigurationSpaceBahahaha! That was great! I loff Tim, he's my favorite out of all of them. Post the next chapter as soon as you possibly can, cause I wanna read more!