for Eternal4/4/2004 c1 
138Lina Inverse
Beautiful... simply beautiful... The first line is perfect... The second is empowering... The third is surreal... And the alliteration in the last line just sounds cool. This reminds me of Salvador Dali's painting with the melting clocks... Was it perhaps an inspiration?
138Lina InverseBeautiful... simply beautiful... The first line is perfect... The second is empowering... The third is surreal... And the alliteration in the last line just sounds cool. This reminds me of Salvador Dali's painting with the melting clocks... Was it perhaps an inspiration?
8/28/2003 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
That's pretty neat! It feels like the world sweeping silently away until only the cool black stone you hold in your palm remains. Wonderful, especially for such a short piece. Thanks so much for the review!
12All Mighty TerrestrialThat's pretty neat! It feels like the world sweeping silently away until only the cool black stone you hold in your palm remains. Wonderful, especially for such a short piece. Thanks so much for the review!