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4/4/2004 c1 138Lina Inverse
Beautiful... simply beautiful... The first line is perfect... The second is empowering... The third is surreal... And the alliteration in the last line just sounds cool. This reminds me of Salvador Dali's painting with the melting clocks... Was it perhaps an inspiration?
8/28/2003 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
That's pretty neat! It feels like the world sweeping silently away until only the cool black stone you hold in your palm remains. Wonderful, especially for such a short piece. Thanks so much for the review!
7/26/2003 c1 28Kellza
Ver' pretty. I think this could be an introduction to a story, it has a definite "prelude" feel to it.

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